First Linguifex Relay/Comparison - Revision history

Fauxlosophe at 17:44, 11 September 2013

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-==Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)==
+I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions, the final version [recorded in literature] shows some minor changes that lend to a more smooth translation.
 ==Katoha avechao==

2013-09-11T04:00:57Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr

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	He drifts [through the] dreaming lands,		He drifts [through the] dreaming lands,
	He sings songs of stillness		He sings songs of stillness
	He sings songs of dying oak ~~trees~~,		He sings songs of dying oak,
	''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''		''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
	[The] gentle prick of forst,		[The] gentle prick of forst,

2013-09-11T04:00:39Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)

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	Negw lho cwe shŷc'hâmonaff nâr,		Negw lho cwe shŷc'hâmonaff nâr,
	Cwec'hŷrh lho hatâr ngec'hŷraff,		Cwec'hŷrh lho hatâr ngec'hŷraff,
	Cwec'hŷrh lho ~~dying oaks~~,		Cwec'hŷrh lho c'harhôn sogwôran,
	''Tepâle rynŷnaff ffa hashâff''		''Tepâle rynŷnaff ffa hashâff''
	Fegw cwemar tegw nug'hôn,		Fegw cwemar tegw nug'hôn,
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	He drifts over dreaming lands,		He drifts over dreaming lands,
	He sings songs of stillness		He sings songs of stillness
	He sings songs of ~~dead~~ oak ~~trees~~,		He sings songs of dying oak,
	''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''		''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
	The gentle prick of forst comes,		The gentle prick of forst comes,

2013-09-11T03:59:26Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)

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	Negw lho cwe shŷc'hâmonaff nâr,		Negw lho cwe shŷc'hâmonaff nâr,
	Cwec'hŷrh lho hatâr ngec'hŷraff,		Cwec'hŷrh lho hatâr ngec'hŷraff,
	Cwec'hŷrh lho ~~c'harhôn sogwôran~~,		Cwec'hŷrh lho dying oaks,
	''Tepâle rynŷnaff ffa hashâff''		''Tepâle rynŷnaff ffa hashâff''
	Fegw cwemar tegw nug'hôn,		Fegw cwemar tegw nug'hôn,

2013-09-11T03:57:32Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr

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	</poem>		</poem>
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	He drifts dreaming lands,		He drifts [through the] dreaming lands,
	He sings songs of stillness		He sings songs of stillness
	He sings songs of ~~dead~~ oak trees,		He sings songs of dying oak trees,
	''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''		''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
	[The] gentle prick of forst,		[The] gentle prick of forst,
	~~Water freezes~~,		Frozen water,
	~~Time drifts~~,		Drifting time,
	''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''		''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
	Silent Cwetŷl,		Silent Cwetŷl,

2013-09-11T03:55:23Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)

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	</poem>		</poem>
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	He drifts [over] dreaming lands,		He drifts over dreaming lands,
	He sings songs of stillness		He sings songs of stillness
	He sings songs of dead oak trees,		He sings songs of dead oak trees,
	''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''		''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
	~~Gentle~~ prick of forst comes,		The gentle prick of forst comes,
	In freezing water,		In freezing water,
	and drifting time,		and drifting time,

2013-09-11T03:54:32Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr

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	</poem>		</poem>
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	~~Insert Rigwayavo to English translation.~~
	~~</poem>~~
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	He drifts dreaming lands,		He drifts dreaming lands,
	He sings songs of stillness		He sings songs of stillness
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	Silent Cwetŷl,		Silent Cwetŷl,
	He knows what is hidden.		He knows what is hidden.
			</poem>
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	~~Notes; In retrospect, I could have made this more poetic and made an error in the initial line where I forgot to add a preposition, given a go over, I'd have gone for;~~

	==Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)==		==Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)==

2013-09-11T03:53:47Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr

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	Notes; In retrospect, I could have made this more poetic and made an error in the initial line where I forgot to add a preposition, given a go over, I'd have gone for;		Notes; In retrospect, I could have made this more poetic and made an error in the initial line where I forgot to add a preposition, given a go over, I'd have gone for;

	==Ashâff nGec'hŷr==		==Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)==

			A second redone attempt in translation. For the most part it is good, however I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions. The one above is a very literal translation where in I'm not too cheritable to myself for my errors, this is a redone version.

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	~~Insert Rigwayavo to English translation.~~
	~~</poem>~~
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	He drifts [over] dreaming lands,		He drifts [over] dreaming lands,
	He sings songs of stillness		He sings songs of stillness
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	For Silent Cwetŷl,		For Silent Cwetŷl,
	He knows what is hidden.		He knows what is hidden.
			</poem>
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2013-09-11T03:51:26Z

Ashâff nGec'hŷr

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 ==Katoha avechao==

2013-09-10T23:07:41Z

Kāni petāhen

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	! [[Harākti]] !! English		! [[Harākti]]* !! English
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	~~Insert Harākti~~ to ~~English translation~~.		He drifted across the land[s] dreaming,
			He sang for nothing to happen,
			He sang about death,
			Two lovers flew with birds,
			A blowing, changing sea,
			a cold sea, a frozen sea.
			The time of change,
			Two lovers flew with birds,
			The goddess of the underworld didn't say,
			(S)he knew secrets.
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			<small>''Note: a few endings may have changed in the language since the translation.''</small>

	==Kanāti hikaukaʻinā==		==Kanāti hikaukaʻinā==