Hwnic/For Ri of the Lab - Revision history

SN2rname at 10:07, 17 February 2025

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-== Glossing ==
+(Sorry, the formatting needs a bit more fine-tuning.)
 == Notes ==
 * Connected speech complicates the pronunciation here: ''defuirn lsvo'' is [dɛ́fʏ̂nˑɺəɫzʋɔ̆], ''cqozeigka'' is [çqó̞zɛɨ̯ʕ̯xâ], ''xornq geq ge'' is [xó̞ɾɤ̃ʔgɤ́ɴqɤ] where standalone ''ge'' is [ŋə̃].

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	{{Hwnic text ~~header}}~~		{{Hwnic text
			\|title=E Ri b Cellax
	~~I don't really know how to write; one thing I do with Hwnic is to describe how unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.~~		\|hwnic=Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
			Qs nerl xulmbohertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
	=~~= ''~~E Ri b Cellax~~'' ==~~
	~~<div style="display:flex;">~~
	~~<pre style~~=~~"flex-basis:50%;">~~
	Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
	Qs nerl ~~xulmbo-ertilncoglycol~~ genxymul rnliv lnkei
	nr jemuqrotacne zifqor		nr jemuqrotacne zifqor
	ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec		ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec
	so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr		so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
	Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo		Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
	rkngesonr ln z ~~delncnar~~		rkngesonr ln z delncti
	Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²		Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²
	elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo		elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
	Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka		Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
	Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹		Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹
	~~</pre>~~		\|en=The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
	~~<pre style~~=~~"flex-basis:50%;">~~
	The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
	Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).		Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).
	In villages once familiar now unwelcoming,		In villages once familiar now unwelcoming,
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	But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude.		But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude.
	Go, and live the way you will.		Go, and live the way you will.
	~~</pre>~~		\|gloss=wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
	~~</div>~~		and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
	* [¹] A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.		LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
	* [²] Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.		LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
			eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
			excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
			place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
			nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
			and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
			not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
			go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
			\|notes=¹ A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.
			² Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.
			}}

	== Glossing ==		== Glossing ==
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	<!--<pre>		<!--<pre>
	~~wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered~~
	~~and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE~~
	~~LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming~~
	~~LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow~~
	~~eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT~~
	~~excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV~~
	~~place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]~~
	~~nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years~~
	~~and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV~~
	~~not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG~~
	~~go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV~~
	</pre>-->		</pre>-->

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	~~\|text=This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; ''e'' "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ''ti'' "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".~~
	~~Numbered superscripts are not part of the orthography but mark notes relevant to the intended meaning of the text.~~
	~~\|type=notice~~
	~~\|image=[[File:~~Hwnic text ~~icon.png]]~~
	}}

	I don't really know how to write; one thing I do with Hwnic is to describe how unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.		I don't really know how to write; one thing I do with Hwnic is to describe how unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.

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	\|text=This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; ''e'' "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ''ti'' "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".		\|text=This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; ''e'' "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ''ti'' "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".
	Numbered superscripts are relevant to the intended meaning of the text ~~and notes in the notes section are relevant to grammar~~.		Numbered superscripts are not part of the orthography but mark notes relevant to the intended meaning of the text.
	\|type=notice		\|type=notice
	\|image=[[File:Hwnic text icon.png]]		\|image=[[File:Hwnic text icon.png]]
	}}		}}

	A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write; with Hwnic I describe how ~~these~~ unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.		I don't really know how to write; one thing I do with Hwnic is to describe how unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.

	== ''E Ri b Cellax'' ==		== ''E Ri b Cellax'' ==
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	Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo		Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
	rkngesonr ln z delncnar		rkngesonr ln z delncnar
	Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul ~~doeci~~		Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²
	elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo		elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
	Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka		Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
	Iza cist ramiv ~~kylnu~~		Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹
	</pre>		</pre>
	<pre style="flex-basis:50%;">		<pre style="flex-basis:50%;">
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	</pre>		</pre>
	</div>		</div>
			* [¹] A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.
			* [²] Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.

	== Glossing ==		== Glossing ==
	<pre>		<pre>

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	go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV		go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
	</pre>		</pre>

			== Notes ==
			* Connected speech complicates the pronunciation here: ''defuirn lsvo'' is [dɛ́fʏ̂nˑɺəɫzʋɔ̆], ''cqozeigka'' is [çqó̞zɛɨ̯ʕ̯xâ], ''xornq geq ge'' is [xó̞ɾɤ̃ʔgɤ́ɴqɤ] where standalone ''ge'' is [ŋə̃].

	<!--<pre>		<!--<pre>
	wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered		wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered

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	A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write; with Hwnic I describe how these unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.		A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write; with Hwnic I describe how these unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.

	~~''Todo: reformat glossing to a line-by-line format; IPA symbols; add a isloxvn image; add a flexbox to place Hwnic & English side by side;''~~		== ''E Ri b Cellax'' ==
			<div style="display:flex;">
	== ''Ri b Cellax e'' ==		<pre style="flex-basis:50%;">
	<div style="display:flex; flex-~~wrap:wrap; flex~~:~~1 1 auto~~;">
	~~<pre~~>
	Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor		Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
	Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei		Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
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	Iza cist ramiv kylnu		Iza cist ramiv kylnu
	</pre>		</pre>
	<pre>		<pre style="flex-basis:50%;">
	The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise		The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
	Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).		Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).

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Flexbox

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	== ~~Hwnic~~ ==		== ''Ri b Cellax e'' ==
			<div style="display:flex; flex-wrap:wrap; flex:1 1 auto;">
	<pre>		<pre>
	Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor		Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
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	Iza cist ramiv kylnu		Iza cist ramiv kylnu
	</pre>		</pre>

	~~== Translation ==~~
	<pre>		<pre>
	The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise		The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
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	Go, and live the way you will.		Go, and live the way you will.
	</pre>		</pre>
			</div>
	== Glossing ==		== Glossing ==
	<pre>		<pre>

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	\|type=notice		\|type=notice
	\|image=Hwnic text icon.png		\|image=[[File:Hwnic text icon.png]]
	}}		}}

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	\|type=notice		\|type=notice
	\|image=~~<!--~~Hwnic text.png~~-->~~		\|image=Hwnic text icon.png
	}}		}}

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	== Glossing ==		== Glossing ==
	<pre>		<pre>
			Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
	wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered		wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
			Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
	and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE		and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
			nr jemuqrotacne zifqor
	LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming		LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
			ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec
	LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow		LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
			so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
	eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT		eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
			Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
	excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV		excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
			rkngesonr ln z delncnar
	place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]		place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
			Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci
	nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years		nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
			elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
	and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV		and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
			Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
	not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG		not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
			Iza cist ramiv kylnu
	go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV		go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
	</pre>		</pre>
			<!--<pre>
			wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
			and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
			LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
			LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
			eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
			excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
			place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
			nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
			and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
			not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
			go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
			</pre>-->

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	so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr		so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
	Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo		Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
	co rkngesonr ln z co delncnar ln		rkngesonr ln z delncnar
	Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci		Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci
	elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo		elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
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	== Glossing ==		== Glossing ==
	<pre>		<pre>
	wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be		wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
	and LOC-and bottom-sky~~[link]~~many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE		and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
	LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming		LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
	LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow		LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
	eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT		eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
	excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV		excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
	~~indef.~~ place-beautiful be.3N but ~~indef. storm_to_be~~ be.3N		place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
	~~Nothing~~ grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM ~~thirty~~ years		nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
	and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV		and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
	~~Not~~ ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG		not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
	go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV		go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
	</pre>		</pre>