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He drifts [through the] dreaming lands, | |||
He sings songs of stillness | |||
He sings songs of dying oak, | |||
''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds'' | |||
[The] gentle prick of forst, | |||
Frozen water, | |||
Drifting time, | |||
''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds'' | |||
Silent Cwetŷl, | |||
He knows what is hidden. | |||
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I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions, the final version [recorded in literature] shows some minor changes that lend to a more smooth translation. | |||
==Katoha avechao== | ==Katoha avechao== | ||