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Tšees fššed-y-lw uu>vvidj<lj-aall | Tšees fššed-y-lw uu>vvidj<lj-aall | ||
{{sc|1s.erg}} wolf-{{sc | {{sc|1s.erg}} wolf-{{sc|acc.sjv}} <{{sc|sjv}}>see-{{sc|sjv.aff.ind.3.liv.prs.incep}} | ||
"''I probably will see the wolf soon''" | "''I probably will see the wolf soon''" | ||
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though, why would it be uninviting? XD | though, why would it be uninviting? XD | ||
[[File:Zelos.png|35px|link=Linguifex:Administrators]] '''[[User Talk:EmperorZelos|<span style="color:#800080;">Emperor Zelos</span>]]''' 19:14, 10 May 2013 (CEST) | [[File:Zelos.png|35px|link=Linguifex:Administrators]] '''[[User Talk:EmperorZelos|<span style="color:#800080;">Emperor Zelos</span>]]''' 19:14, 10 May 2013 (CEST) | ||
It looks better much now! I wrote the first reply in a bit of a rush, but you did most of the stuff I was trying to recommend [ironically I'm much more careful to have good grammar in my French replies, my mistakes in English are native ones]. I remember reading it as "see-sjv-aff.ind.3.liv.prs.incep" which just boggled me especially since I didn't notice the root in the center and thought that it was drawing on having a static consonants in the center while moving around vowels to indicate most tenses/cases while adding suffixes and prefixes for those that don't. The current version is a lot clearer, though it still looks a little complex for a natlang [Though I have a bias towards Western European languages and what you have seems somewhat comparable with Finnish], if you'd like though I can look over it in more detail before saying anything further as right now I'm just giving first impressions. | |||
One more thing I'd do is separate the aa from the ll in "uuvvidjljaall" if that is at all possible since from what I can tell on your tables, they serve slightly different grammatical functions. | |||
-[[User:Fauxlosophe|Fauxlosophe]] ([[User talk:Fauxlosophe|talk]]) 19:25, 10 May 2013 (CEST) | |||
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