User talk:Fauxlosophe: Difference between revisions

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Tšees fššed-y-lw uu>vvidj<lj-aall
Tšees fššed-y-lw uu>vvidj<lj-aall


{{sc|1s.erg}} wolf-{{sc:acc.sjv}} <{{sc|sjv}}>see-{{sc|sjv.aff.ind.3.liv.prs.incep}}
{{sc|1s.erg}} wolf-{{sc|acc.sjv}} <{{sc|sjv}}>see-{{sc|sjv.aff.ind.3.liv.prs.incep}}


"''I probably will see the wolf soon''"
"''I probably will see the wolf soon''"
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though, why would it be uninviting? XD
though, why would it be uninviting? XD
[[File:Zelos.png|35px|link=Linguifex:Administrators]]&nbsp;'''[[User Talk:EmperorZelos|<span style="color:#800080;">Emperor Zelos</span>]]''' 19:14, 10 May 2013 (CEST)
[[File:Zelos.png|35px|link=Linguifex:Administrators]]&nbsp;'''[[User Talk:EmperorZelos|<span style="color:#800080;">Emperor Zelos</span>]]''' 19:14, 10 May 2013 (CEST)
It looks better much now! I wrote the first reply in a bit of a rush, but you did most of the stuff I was trying to recommend [ironically I'm much more careful to have good grammar in my French replies, my mistakes in English are native ones]. I remember reading it as "see-sjv-aff.ind.3.liv.prs.incep" which just boggled me especially since I didn't notice the root in the center and thought that it was drawing on having a static consonants in the center while moving around vowels to indicate most tenses/cases while adding suffixes and prefixes for those that don't. The current version is a lot clearer, though it still looks a little complex for a natlang [Though I have a bias towards Western European languages and what you have seems somewhat comparable with Finnish], if you'd like though I can look over it in more detail before saying anything further as right now I'm just giving first impressions.
One more thing I'd do is separate the aa from the ll in "uuvvidjljaall" if that is at all possible since from what I can tell on your tables, they serve slightly different grammatical functions.
-[[User:Fauxlosophe|Fauxlosophe]] ([[User talk:Fauxlosophe|talk]]) 19:25, 10 May 2013 (CEST)


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