Hwnic/For Ri of the Lab
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Hwnic text icon.png | This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; e "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ti "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".
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A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write; with Hwnic I describe how these unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.
Todo: reformat glossing to a line-by-line format; IPA symbols; add a isloxvn image; add a flexbox to place Hwnic & English side by side;
Hwnic
Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei nr jemuqrotacne zifqor ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo rkngesonr ln z delncnar Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka Iza cist ramiv kylnu
Translation
The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more). In villages once familiar now unwelcoming, feeling so small under the dome, where it glows -- perpetual morphing shapes that trace upwards to the top of the world -- Yes, the sunlit landscape/barrens which you had walked, it's a beautiful place, but a storm is near. Nothing grows in the poison-laden soil for twenty years. The burning passion, formless anger, and inspiration have all dissipated. But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude. Go, and live the way you will.
Glossing
Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE nr jemuqrotacne zifqor LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV rkngesonr ln z delncnar place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N] Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG Iza cist ramiv kylnu go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV