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-He drifts dreaming lands,
+He drifts [through the] dreaming lands,
 He sings songs of stillness
-He sings songs of dead oak trees,
+He sings songs of dying oak,
 ''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
 [The] gentle prick of forst,
-Water freezes,
+Frozen water,
-Time drifts,
+Drifting time,
 ''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
 Silent Cwetŷl,
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-==Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)==
+I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions, the final version [recorded in literature] shows some minor changes that lend to a more smooth translation.
-A second redone attempt in translation. For the most part it is good, however I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions. The one above is a very literal translation where in I'm not too cheritable to myself for my errors, this is a redone version.
-<center>
-{|border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="5" align="center"
-! [[Cwengâr]] !! English
-|- style="vertical-align: top;"
-|<poem>
-Negw lho cwe shŷc'hâmonaff nâr,
-Cwec'hŷrh lho hatâr ngec'hŷraff,
-Cwec'hŷrh lho c'harhôn sogwôran,
-''Tepâle rynŷnaff ffa hashâff''
-Fegw cwemar tegw nug'hôn,
-cwâ cwemacwen c'han.
-ô negw fôffan
-''Tepâle rynŷnaff ffa hashâff''
-Pon Temerhôlh C'hetŷl,
-Cwâm lho henâm hâtaff.
-</poem>
-|<poem>
-He drifts over dreaming lands,
-He sings songs of stillness
-He sings songs of dead oak trees,
-''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
-The gentle prick of forst comes,
-In freezing water,
-and drifting time,
-''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds''
-For Silent Cwetŷl,
-He knows what is hidden.
-</poem>
-|}
 ==Katoha avechao==