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A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. | A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write, but I feel I should save these unique emotions somewhere. | ||
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Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more). | Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more). | ||
In villages once familiar now unwelcoming, | In villages once familiar now unwelcoming, | ||
feeling so small under the | feeling so small under the dome, where it glows | ||
-- perpetual morphing shapes that trace upwards to the top of the world -- | -- perpetual morphing shapes that trace upwards to the top of the world -- | ||
Yes, the sunlit landscape/barrens which you had walked, | Yes, the sunlit landscape/barrens which you had walked, | ||
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== Glossing == | == Glossing == | ||
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wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be | |||
and LOC-and bottom-sky many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE | |||
LOC village familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming | |||
LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome | |||
that LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT | |||
excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV | |||
indef. place-beautiful be.3N but indef. storm_to_be be.3N | |||
Nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM thirty years | |||
and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark dissipate.3Pl PST.PFV | |||
Not ? failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ? ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG | |||
go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV | |||
</pre> | |||
Revision as of 12:36, 17 January 2025
 | This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; e "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ti "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".
Numbered superscripts are relevant to the intended meaning of the text and notes in the notes section are relevant to grammar. |
A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write, but I feel I should save these unique emotions somewhere.
Todo: complete glossing; IPA symbols; add a isloxvn image; add a flexbox fmtt;
Hwnic
Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor Qs nerl xulmbo ertilncoglycol genx ymul rnliv lnkei nr jemuq rotacne zifqor ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr Mise ntap vemjnr v iuf unir sntev lsvo co rkngesonr ln z co delncnar ln Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci nlbsaqer v dizitsvirur etu masaqe ln Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka Iza cist ramiv drlnu
Line 2 has a PST.UNDONE
The last word is a VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
Translation
The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more). In villages once familiar now unwelcoming, feeling so small under the dome, where it glows -- perpetual morphing shapes that trace upwards to the top of the world -- Yes, the sunlit landscape/barrens which you had walked, it's a beautiful place, but a storm is near. Nothing grows in the poison-laden soil for twenty years. The burning passion, formless anger, and inspiration have all dissipated. But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude. Go, and live the way you will.
Glossing
wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be and LOC-and bottom-sky many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE LOC village familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome that LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV indef. place-beautiful be.3N but indef. storm_to_be be.3N Nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM thirty years and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark dissipate.3Pl PST.PFV Not ? failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ? ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV