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He drifts [through the] dreaming lands, | |||
He sings songs of stillness | |||
He sings songs of dying oak, | |||
''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds'' | |||
[The] gentle prick of forst, | |||
Frozen water, | |||
Drifting time, | |||
''Fly Lovers with [the] Birds'' | |||
Silent Cwetŷl, | |||
He knows what is hidden. | |||
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I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions, the final version [recorded in literature] shows some minor changes that lend to a more smooth translation. | |||
==Katoha avechao== | ==Katoha avechao== | ||
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! [[Harākti]] !! English | ! [[Harākti]]* !! English | ||
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He drifted across the land[s] dreaming, | |||
He sang for nothing to happen, | |||
He sang about death, | |||
Two lovers flew with birds, | |||
A blowing, changing sea, | |||
a cold sea, a frozen sea. | |||
The time of change, | |||
Two lovers flew with birds, | |||
The goddess of the underworld didn't say, | |||
(S)he knew secrets. | |||
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<small>''Note: a few endings may have changed in the language since the translation.''</small> | |||
==Kanāti hikaukaʻinā== | ==Kanāti hikaukaʻinā== | ||
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There is wandering on the earth - a dream, | There is wandering on the earth - a dream, | ||
There is singing without purpose, | There is singing without purpose, | ||
There is singing like | There is singing like murder, | ||
Two lovers | Two lovers fly with songbirds, | ||
The raging and changing sea, | |||
The freezing sea, the icy sea, | |||
Two seasons of change, | Two seasons of change, | ||
Two lovers | Two lovers fly with songbirds, | ||
The great ocean was in silence, | The great ocean was in silence, | ||
The great ocean saw what was hidden. | The great ocean saw what was hidden. | ||