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Notes; In retrospect, I could have made this more poetic and made an error in the initial line where I forgot to add a preposition, given a go over, I'd have gone for; | Notes; In retrospect, I could have made this more poetic and made an error in the initial line where I forgot to add a preposition, given a go over, I'd have gone for; | ||
==Ashâff nGec'hŷr== | ==Ashâff nGec'hŷr (Edited)== | ||
A second redone attempt in translation. For the most part it is good, however I must confess that the aggulnative nature of Valian made me miss prepositions. The one above is a very literal translation where in I'm not too cheritable to myself for my errors, this is a redone version. | |||
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He drifts [over] dreaming lands, | He drifts [over] dreaming lands, | ||
He sings songs of stillness | He sings songs of stillness | ||
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For Silent Cwetŷl, | For Silent Cwetŷl, | ||
He knows what is hidden. | He knows what is hidden. | ||
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