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Cheers,
Cheers,
-[[User:Fauxlosophe|Fauxlosophe]] ([[User talk:Fauxlosophe|talk]]) 23:36, 8 May 2013 (CEST)
-[[User:Fauxlosophe|Fauxlosophe]] ([[User talk:Fauxlosophe|talk]]) 23:36, 8 May 2013 (CEST)
I'll get right to it:
===Aesthetics and layout===
*Have you considered the "bluetable lightbluebg" class for your tables?
*A small text above all tables make it look a bit more inviting.
* Maybe put the phrasebook in a table? Then it takes less space, and is more easily read.
===Wording and orthography===
*Try to have as a rule to either bolden or use oblique on words in your conlang. That way they are more easily visible.
*The phonotactics section require needs to be clarified and reworded. Have you considered to bolden the '''C'''s and '''V'''s?
**"In larger words, the consonant of the root word will be; C-V-C." - I fail to understand this sentence, I fear!
*In the Quantifying determiners section, it'd be better if you stated that they should be followed by the noun, rather than showing it in the table.
*Do not capitalise grammatical terms. If you want them emphasised, please use bold or oblique fonts.
*Typo: Lenition, not lentition.
*Please do not abbreviate to "Misc".
*The headers should only have the initial capitalised.
===Grammar, phonology and terminology===
*In the grammar section, I would prefer a table of pronouns labelled similarly to [[Biscayan]], but you have so few that you do not need to split them into singular and plural.
*I recommend you to use the following terms in your Determiners section:
**Current - Proximal
**Contrasting - Distal
**New - Alternative
**Inquisitive - Interrogative
*Examples are always welcome!
*Try to put all phonemes in slashes or brackets!
*I enjoy your syntax sections on phrases/clauses as well as those on prepositions! More on those and I'd die happily!
*I always like to see more on the phonology. Is there allophony? Sandhi? Dissimilation? If not, I would like it stated as such.
[[File:Waahlis.png|35px|link=Linguifex:Administrators]] '''[[User talk:Waahlis|<span style="color: Orange;">Waahlis</span>]]'''  22:53, 9 May 2013 (CEST)