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 ==Later life==
-For the rest of her life, she abandoned research mathematics. Sgutsitn took up jobs as a mathematics teacher in schools. She simultaneously corresponded with a number of composers and musicians to exchange ideas about music. Those would inspire her to further develop the music theory at that time.
+For the rest of her life, she abandoned research mathematics. Sgutsitn taught mathematics in schools, while she corresponded with a number of composers and musicians to exchange ideas about music. Those would inspire her to further develop the music theory at that time.
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