Verse:Hmøøh/Txapoalli: Difference between revisions

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 Proto-Sjowaazhic speakers settled Sjowaazhéñ.
-The Naquian Empire was initially polytheistic, but near the end of its era developed a theater tradition about formerly religious things. This caused something of an upheaval in society, as the old religious authorities brooked no modification of the traditional religion.
+The Naquian Empire was initially polytheistic, but near the end of its era developed a theater tradition about themes that were formerly the province of religion. This caused something of an upheaval in society, as the old religious authorities brooked no modification of the traditional religion.
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