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-[[User:Fauxlosophe|Fauxlosophe]] ([[User talk:Fauxlosophe|talk]]) 23:36, 8 May 2013 (CEST) | -[[User:Fauxlosophe|Fauxlosophe]] ([[User talk:Fauxlosophe|talk]]) 23:36, 8 May 2013 (CEST) | ||
I'll get right to it: | |||
===Aesthetics and layout=== | |||
*Have you considered the "bluetable lightbluebg" class for your tables? | |||
*A small text above all tables make it look a bit more inviting. | |||
* Maybe put the phrasebook in a table? Then it takes less space, and is more easily read. | |||
===Wording and orthography=== | |||
*Try to have as a rule to either bolden or use oblique on words in your conlang. That way they are more easily visible. | |||
*The phonotactics section require needs to be clarified and reworded. Have you considered to bolden the '''C'''s and '''V'''s? | |||
**"In larger words, the consonant of the root word will be; C-V-C." - I fail to understand this sentence, I fear! | |||
*In the Quantifying determiners section, it'd be better if you stated that they should be followed by the noun, rather than showing it in the table. | |||
*Do not capitalise grammatical terms. If you want them emphasised, please use bold or oblique fonts. | |||
*Typo: Lenition, not lentition. | |||
*Please do not abbreviate to "Misc". | |||
*The headers should only have the initial capitalised. | |||
===Grammar, phonology and terminology=== | |||
*In the grammar section, I would prefer a table of pronouns labelled similarly to [[Biscayan]], but you have so few that you do not need to split them into singular and plural. | |||
*I recommend you to use the following terms in your Determiners section: | |||
**Current - Proximal | |||
**Contrasting - Distal | |||
**New - Alternative | |||
**Inquisitive - Interrogative | |||
*Examples are always welcome! | |||
*Try to put all phonemes in slashes or brackets! | |||
*I enjoy your syntax sections on phrases/clauses as well as those on prepositions! More on those and I'd die happily! | |||
*I always like to see more on the phonology. Is there allophony? Sandhi? Dissimilation? If not, I would like it stated as such. | |||
[[File:Waahlis.png|35px|link=Linguifex:Administrators]] '''[[User talk:Waahlis|<span style="color: Orange;">Waahlis</span>]]''' 22:53, 9 May 2013 (CEST) | |||